< body of a child, which then degrades in later chapters to confused tween wondering which boy-toy is actually in to her. Initially, the MC is portrayed as a strong-willed older woman in the. The writing, while it has its moments, becomes rather dull and lacks any real meaning aside from making the MC look better. The story is nothing new, and quite frankly it causes the later chapters to become extremely predictable and boring. The grammar is about standard most of the time, showing instances of awkward wording/phrasing, and misspelling. That aside, let's get to the actual review. Initially I enjoyed the story, probably from chapter 3~18. The world building could potentially be interesting, and there might be a more interesting plot, but judging from the description and the fact that it isn't off to the strongest start, there's still a lot of room for improvement. Aside from the mental age gap, the MC's speech is also pretty tedious to read, since it's just an adult woman lecturing kids, but for some reason they enjoy it so. In terms of story, it's very much character driven, with the MC's maternal act somehow drawing several love interests towards her. really very young, and it's a little weird since she's still an adult in my mind. Where usual rebirth stories take the stance of a child with memories of their past life, the MC is very much a 20 something year old in the body of a child, and all her actions and speech fall in line with this.
But honestly, these scenarios are a dime a dozen and this series doesn't really bring anything new to the table, aside from the world's least convincing child nor does it surpass other series in terms of quality or entertainment. A cute reverse harem reincarnation story.
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